Why am I here?
Bikko won't pose, or she will but gives the character nothing. I give her three scenes, and she rejects all of them. While she explains her rejections, I write the following:
Why am I here?
The story isn't here. Unless the story is about how you look at women.
Or maybe about what it is you think women want you to see.
The critical part of your story, Sean, will always be what a woman wants to show you. And the woman in the story, me, wants to know who you will show her to.
Am I here just to be shown off in a story? Or am I here to be seen by you?
Or am I here simply because you want to see me, and I can't resist?
Why am I here?
The story isn't here. Unless the story is about how you look at women.
Or maybe about what it is you think women want you to see.
The critical part of your story, Sean, will always be what a woman wants to show you. And the woman in the story, me, wants to know who you will show her to.
Am I here just to be shown off in a story? Or am I here to be seen by you?
Or am I here simply because you want to see me, and I can't resist?
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